A New Twist to the Lord’s Prayer


Our Father, who art in Heaven.


Don’t interrupt me – I’m praying.

But you called me.

Called you? No, I didn’t call you. I’m praying. Our Father, who art in Heaven.

There – you did it again!

Did what?

Called me. You said, “Our Father, who art in Heaven.” Well, here I am. What’s on your mind?

But, I didn’t mean anything by it. I was, you know, just saying my prayers for the day. I always say the Lord’s Prayer. It makes me feel good, kind of like fulfilling a duty.

Well, all right. Go on.

Okay. Hallowed be Thy name …

Hold it right there. What do you mean by that?

By what?


It means, it means … good grief, I don’t know what it means. How in the world should I know? It’s just a part of the prayer. By the way, what does it mean?

It means honoured, holy, wonderful.

Hey, that makes sense. I never thought about what ‘hallowed’ meant before. Thanks. Thy kingdom come, Thy will be done, on earth as it is in Heaven.

Do you really mean that?

Sure, why not?

What are you doing about it?

Doing? Why, nothing I guess. I just think it would be kind of neat if you got control of everything down here like you have up there. We’re in rather a mess down here, you know.

Yes, I know; but, have I got control of you?

Well, I go to church …

That isn’t what I asked you. What about your bad temper? You’ve really got a problem there, you know. And then there’s the way you spend your money – all on yourself. And what about the kind of books you read?

Now hold on a minute! Stop picking on me – I’m just as good as some of the other people at church!

Excuse me. I thought you were praying for My will to be done. If that is to happen, it will have to start with the ones who are praying for it. Like you, for example.

Oh, all right. I guess I do have some hang-ups. Now that you mention it, I could probably think of some others.

So could I.

I haven’t thought about it very much until now, but I really would like to cut out some of those things. I would like to, you know, be really free.

Good. Now we’re getting somewhere. We’ll work together – you and I. I’m proud of you!

Look, Lord, if you don’t mind, I need to finish this prayer. It’s taking a lot longer than it usually does. Give us this day our daily bread.

You need to cut down on the physical bread - you’re overweight as it is, and instead have a little more spiritual food on a daily basis.

Hey, wait a minute! Here I am, doing my religious duty, and all of a sudden you interrupt and remind me of all my faults!

Praying is a dangerous thing. You just might get what you ask for. Remember – you called me, and here I am. It’s too late to stop now – keep praying.

… (pause) …

Well, go on.

I’m scared to.

Scared? Of what?

I know what you’ll say.

Try me.

Forgive us our sins, as we forgive those who sin against us.

What about Jane?

There, I knew it! I knew you’d bring her up! Why, Lord, she’s told lies about me, spread malicious stories. She hasn’t paid back the money she owes me. I’ve sworn to get even with her!

But – your prayer – what about your prayer?

I didn’t mean it.

Well, at least you’re honest. But it’s quite a load carrying around all that bitterness and resentment, isn’t it?

Yes, but I’ll feel better as soon as I sort her out – she’ll wish she’d never been born!

No, you won’t feel any better. You’ll feel worse. Revenge isn’t sweet. You know how unhappy you are – well, I can change that.

You can? How?

Forgive Jane. Then, I’ll forgive you, and the sin and hate will be Jane’s problem – not yours. You’ll have settled the problem as far as you’re concerned.

Oh, you know, you’re right. You always are. And more than I want revenge, I want to be right with You … (sigh). All right … all right … I forgive her.

There now! Wonderful! How do you feel?

Hmmm, well, not bad. Not bad at all. In fact, I feel pretty great! You know, I don’t think I’ll go to bed uptight tonight. I haven’t been getting much rest, you know.

I know. But, you’re not through with your prayer are you? Go on.

And lead us not into temptation, but deliver us from evil.

Good! Good! I’ll do that. Just don’t put yourself in a position where you can be tempted.

What do you mean by that?

You know what I mean.

Yes, I know.

Okay, go ahead. Finish your prayer.

For thine is the kingdom, the power, and the glory. Amen.

Do you know what would bring me glory – what would really make me happy?

No, but I’d like to know. I want to please You now. I’ve really made a mess of things. I want to truly follow you. I can see now how great that would be. So, tell me – how do I make You happy?

You just did.

This page was last updated February 2005